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Lauren Dougherty
Mar 30, 2003, 02:57 am
<a href="http://x-mencomics.com/xfan/images/logos/oscc_logo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://x-mencomics.com/xfan/images/logos/oscc_logot.jpg" alt="Our So Called Column logo" align=left></a>By Lauren Dougherty (laurendougherty@xfan.cjb.net) and Anthony Zisa (aczisa@xfan.cjb.net)

For immediate release:

Marvel is very proud to announce the first part of our recent partnership with J.K. Rowling, world famous author of the blockbuster Harry Potter series. Ms. Rowling will be creating a number of novels based on Marvel properties, and we here at Marvel are very pleased to present to you some preview samples from our first collaboration, inspired by a short story from yours truly, Barnell Bohusk and the Chamber of Cerebra.

Love and kisses to my many adoring fans, Bill Jemas.

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BILL JEMAS and J.K. Rowling present... Barnell Bohusk and the Chamber of Cerebra

Barnell Bohusk, known to his friends as the Beak, was a highly unusual boy in many ways. For one thing, he was extremely happy to be back in school. For another, one of his biggest problems this term was how he was going to pass his flying exam. And he also happened to be a mutant.

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As he stepped through the mahogany double doors of Xavier's Institute for Higher Learning, Barnell worried about the coming term. He had not seen his best (and, truth be told, only) friend, Angel Salvadore all summer, and was anxious to catch up with her. However, he would first have to survive his Telepathy class, taught by his least favourite teacher, Professor Frost.

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Frost threw a dirty glance at Barnell as he entered her classroom. He could tell she remembered the embarrassing situation last year when the school's premier telepath, Quentin Quire, had taken over his mind and made him say all sorts of rudeness to her.

As if Quire's practical joke hadn't done the trick, Barnell's mutation was one that altered his physical appearance, and he knew Professor Frost was not particularly fond of mutants who barely managed a state of anthropomorphism. Adding to these problems, Barnell was pure rubbish at telepathic defense, the central lesson of Frost's class.

Barnell sunk low in his seat, hoping to avoid Frost's piercing glare.

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Barnell's next class was Defence Against Dark Mutants, and he was eager to find out about the new professor. Xavier's had a nagging problem retaining Defence Against Dark Mutants teachers, as they all seemed to end up rather dead. Just last year, they had lost Professor Laynia Sergeievna Petrovna Krylenko, sometimes called Darkstar, on holiday in Paris. The year prior, Professor Elizabeth Braddock, known to her friends as Psylocke, was impaled before ever teaching a single lesson while on holiday in Spain. Rumour had it that the job was cursed. Or, at the very least, it was in very bad form for Xavier Institute teachers to go abroad.

<a href="http://www.fakecajun.com/phoenixfire/Barnell.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.fakecajun.com/phoenixfire/Barnell_tmb.jpg" align=right alt="Barnell Bohusk and the Chamber of Cerebra"></a>The professor was tall, lanky, with a long beard and a shaggy shock of white hair. He was dressed in the oddest combination of purple and red robes, and his belt buckle seemed to vibrate at attention as he moved. His voice boomed as he introduced himself.

"Hello, children, and welcome to our first Defence Against Dark Mutants lesson. I am your instructor, Professor Otengam. I understand you have had some--problems--with previous instructors, and I promise my best to stay unimpaled while teaching you all. I tried the whole impaling thing once, but it didn't agree with me." His mouth curled upwards at his private joke, but something about the near sneer upset Barnell. Otengam seemed to notice the minute changes in Barnell's emotions, and threw him a strange glance.

"Our first Dark Mutants will be the late Brotherhood of Evil Mutants. Some might say they were misunderstood. It is certain that their leader, despite his roguish good looks, charm, and elegance, was a thorn in the side of many of your other teachers for a good number of years, prior to his untimely demise." He snickered. "Anyway, open your texts to page 12, and we'll begin."

It was at this point that Barnell began to notice the increasing pain in his forehead. His fingers moved softly over the lightning bolt shaped scar located on the left side of his forehead, a relic from the tragic deep fryer accident that claimed his parent's lives many years ago. Every time Otengam looked at him, the scar released another sharp jolt of pain.

Otengam just smiled.

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After his unsettling Defence Against Dark Mutants lesson, Barnell opted to forego his arranged meeting with Angel out by the shady grove, and went instead to one of the few people on campus he knew could give him answers. However, before he could reach the door to the school grounds, he heard a high, sharp voice call out to him, "Have a headache, poor little Barnell?" He turned around, knowing exactly who would be standing behind him. It was Sammy Pare, Barnell's biggest (and only) nemesis.

Sammy Pare and Barnell had been enemies since last term at Xavier's, when the two had a severe row over who would make the most delicious Japanese dish. Barnell insisted that dipping himself in teriyaki sauce would be to die for, while Sammy attempted to counter that a roll in some rice and vegetables would make Sammy scrumptious sushi. The argument had degenerated into blows, which some onlookers categorized as violent, but strangely mouth-watering. The two now regarded one another only with the utmost loathing, and Barnell narrowed his beady bird eyes as Sammy passed him, a look of dislike Sammy readily returned. Under normal conditions, Barnell would have exchanged words, but he was intent upon reaching the school grounds.

Ignoring Sammy's clucking sounds, which sounded uncannily like his own, Barnell walked across the school grounds, knocking on the door to the shack that was the residence of the school's groundskeeper, only known as Logan. A short, ferocious wolverine of a man, Logan had lived countless lifespans, and surely could provide some answers to Barnell's questions.

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"So the new Dark Mutants teacher's been making yer scar hurt, eh Bub? Well, that's a pretty dangerous thing, by my reckoning. See, I know something Xavier never told ya, and I think it might just be time to lay down the truth fer ya. Ya didn't get that scar in the fryer accident, kid. Yer parents, they were killed by Magneto."

"By Magneto? But that's impossible! My parents were killed when they were accidentally dropped into a fryer at the local KFC, and the fryer oil splashed on my head, scarring me! They couldn't have been killed by Magneto!"

"But kid... who ordered the twelve-piece bucket yer parents ended up as?"

Barnell's vision began to blur as the Logan's words sunk in--Magneto had eaten his parents!

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"Professor," Barnell gasped, "there is something horribly wrong with the new Defence Against Dark Mutants instructor!"

"I quite understand your concern, Barnell," said Xavier. He motioned for Barnell to sit down. "I reassure you, there is nothing to worry about concerning Professor Otengam."

"But Professor Otengam... he's Magneto!"

"Yes, I was quite aware of that fact when I hired him. Do not worry, Barnell. The staff has taken certain--precautions--to prevent Magneto's true character from rising to the surface."

Barnell, astonished, took a minute to regain his wits. "Professor, I'm beginning to think you might want to rethink your approach to hiring former enemies as instructors."

Xavier's eyes twinkled mischievously. "Barnell, perhaps you are correct."

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Barnell, Angel, and Basilisk gazed in horror at the words written upon the wall.

"The Chamber of Cerebra has been opened. Enemies of the magnetic one start to run."

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Hey, guys, Bill again! Just want to remind you guys that I inspired this lovely story, and that you should check it out! I also hear Ms. Rowling is no slouch, either! Hopefully, after our first few collaborations together, she'll be able to step out and perhaps even write a book on her own! She might be ready for the big leagues!

Don't miss out on Barnell Bohusk and the Chamber of Cerebra! It'll be coming at you this July from Marvel, right before some other book about some kid who looks suspiciously like a DC character (and we know how much we hate those, am I right or am I right?), so ours deserves your money more!

Tootles!
Yours, Bill Jemas
COO and inspiration to all
Marvel Enterprises

All characters &trade; and &copy; their respective owners. All Rights Reserved. The preceding article was a work of fiction, and any similarities to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. All parody of public figures protected under Hustler Magazine v. Falwell, 485 US 46, 108 S.Ct 876, 99 L.Ed.2d 41 (1988), and is intended to be comic, not malicious.

Lauren Dougherty had to go and make things so complicated. She's acting like she's somebody else, makes me frustrated!

Anthony Zisa is a Sk8tr Boi. He says "C U l8tr boi!"

Zachary J. Morrison
Mar 30, 2003, 03:15 am
LOL! This is funny...I was thinking, this has to be a joke. And no wonder, it probably is. But the story is good. But NOOO Jean and Logan....WHHHHYYYYY? I'm obessed about those two...EEEEK!!!

thebigO
Mar 30, 2003, 03:22 am
this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.

its not even funny.

O

Sara Owens
Mar 30, 2003, 03:34 am
God, I love you two. MWAH!

But the best part has to totally be:
Lauren Dougherty had to go and make things so complicated. She's acting like she's somebody else, makes me frustrated!

Anthony Zisa is a Sk8tr Boi. He says "C U l8tr boi!"

BenedictX
Mar 30, 2003, 03:34 am
re: this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.

its not even funny.

O

May I be permitted to say: get over yourself.


what does it say about you that you not only read it, but then posted this very eloquent response. Who has more free time on their hands, eh?

if you dn't like it, don't read it, and certainly don't post this type of nonsense response to it. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, not flaming, ok?

Anthony, this was brilliant, as usual, and i find myself looking forward to your column almost above all others (but don't tell Jim Lemoine) And contrary to the opinion of the above genius, satire is the hardest literary skill to pull off, and nothing about it should be considered a waste of time.

i apologize if any morons were offended by my above statements . . . just kidding. I don't apologize.

BenedictX
Mar 30, 2003, 03:40 am
here's where i get to feel stupid . . . the baove comments should be attributed to Lauren as well. I do realize that this is a 2-person project, and hope i didn't offend Lauren by inadvertantly leaving her out of what I said.

wonderful stuff, people, keep it up

Bloodstain
Mar 30, 2003, 04:25 am
April Fools?

Wolverine
Mar 30, 2003, 04:52 am
THis is really funny stuff!

Anthony Zisa
Mar 30, 2003, 04:59 am
Originally posted by thebigO
this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.

its not even funny.

O

Well, that's probably because humor is a subjective thing.

But thanks for the constructive feedback, sweetheart. Your objection to our column's existance is duly noted. :kiss:

--acz

Lauren Dougherty
Mar 30, 2003, 05:10 am
Originally posted by thebigO
this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.

its not even funny.

O

Oh don't be coy...

I can tell you have a crush on us. And I see you subscribed to this thread. :shhh: So... how're you doin'?


Originally posted by BenedictX
here's where i get to feel stupid . . . the baove comments should be attributed to Lauren as well. I do realize that this is a 2-person project, and hope i didn't offend Lauren by inadvertantly leaving her out of what I said.

wonderful stuff, people, keep it up

No offense taken at all. In fact, I think you're a total sweetheart. Thanks for the kind words, hun. ;)

thebigO
Mar 30, 2003, 05:18 am
i dont like bagging out people's stuff. i ust thought i should voice my disliking of this.....fanfic.

i guess i think it has a time and a place and i dont believe this is it. i wont be reading the column again. maybe X-Fan should have a 'special' spot for this kind of stuff.

i hate to say "yeah well i hate this, i'm going" because then it seems to give you guys an ego trip. so i will respond.


i dont think this kind of column is either good or funny, and i believe it is misplaced on this site due to the rest of the infomation found in the site. whilst i understand and respect the need for diversity here, i will again state that every thing has a place, and i really dont think its cool.

why not have a spot like the review section?
( could it possibly be it would have less readership? haha! this reminds me of how the t.v networks put a crappy sitcom after friends, not that friends is't crap but you get what i mean i'm sure)

and while i think the column is a waste of time, i reckon that its not a waste of time to voice yor opinon,( especially if it is mine!)

i love how forums are created for discussion but damn you if you dont like what we like!!!!


O

Anthony Zisa
Mar 30, 2003, 05:39 am
Originally posted by thebigO
i dont like bagging out people's stuff. i ust thought i should voice my disliking of this.....fanfic.

i guess i think it has a time and a place and i dont believe this is it. i wont be reading the column again. maybe X-Fan should have a 'special' spot for this kind of stuff.

Okay. Fair enough. You didn't enjoy the column/fanfic/whatever you want to categorize it as, and you're not going to read it again. I respect that. Lord knows there's plenty of stuff I've given a try, didn't enjoy, and passed on in the future.

i hate to say &quot;yeah well i hate this, i'm going&quot; because then it seems to give you guys an ego trip. so i will respond.

...okay. Not quite sure where you're getting that from. Lauren and I most assuredly aren't taking your criticism as some kind of ego-boost.

i dont think this kind of column is either good or funny, and i believe it is misplaced on this site due to the rest of the infomation found in the site. whilst i understand and respect the need for diversity here, i will again state that every thing has a place, and i really dont think its cool.

why not have a spot like the review section?
( could it possibly be it would have less readership? haha! this reminds me of how the t.v networks put a crappy sitcom after friends, not that friends is't crap but you get what i mean i'm sure)

Probably... because it's not a review... it's a column, which X-Fan puts under features...

And the review forum gets quite a bit of traffic on its own, by the way. Just thought I'd throw that out there.

and while i think the column is a waste of time, i reckon that its not a waste of time to voice yor opinon,( especially if it is mine!)

i love how forums are created for discussion but damn you if you dont like what we like!!!!

I don't see where anyone told you you couldn't have an opinion. I do see someone asking you to elaborate on WHY it's "stupid," "crappy," "a waste of my time," and "not even funny" (all your exact wording). To be quite honest, I'm interested. I don't think anyone who writes something for public consumption only wants to hear "I love it."

You didn't like it, which is cool by me. Lauren and I never expect EVERYONE to love what we write. In fact, I've fully expected more people to hate it than anything. We're shooting for humor, which is probably one of the hardest things to do, because everyone has a personal aesthetic and taste when it comes to what's funny and what's not.

However, I do ask you to understand where Lauren and I are coming from. Crappy as you may think the column was, we do put time, energy, and a bit of ourselves into producing it, and we would really appreciate it if you told us WHY you didn't like it, WHAT didn't work, and HOW we could improve (all from your personal viewpoint, naturally). Calling it "stupid," "crappy," and whatnot doesn't tell us anything, and doesn't help us improve what we're doing, and try to make our column more enjoyable for everyone who reads it.

Because, in the end, we're only trying to entertain. Nothing deeper than that. We're just trying to make a few people laugh a few times, and as far as I'm concerned, if we just make one person laugh once, we did our job.

Thanks for the feedback, and I do honestly hope you address my concerns, because I know I took the time to try and address yours.

Cheers,
--acz

nina
Mar 30, 2003, 05:55 am
Originally posted by thebigO
this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.


Did Anthony hold a gun to your head too?!?!?! He made me read it!! And when I didn't laugh hard enough, he beat me until I laughed harder.... :(

ManolisV
Mar 30, 2003, 06:08 am
worst column ever!!

What are you people, idiots? i would think it obvious to cast Sammy as Ron, Quentin Quire as Brat Malfoy and Basilisk as the Basilisk!!! Of all the lousy...

-russum frussum-

:p

Zach Kinkead
Mar 30, 2003, 07:06 am
How DARE you combine the wonderfulousness (my spell checker LIES, that is so a real word) that is Beak with the evil that is “Harry Potter and the Neil Gaiman lawsuit just waiting to happen” :mad:

Originally posted by Bloodstain
April Fools?

Sort of. It’s a humor column

vengfulgod13
Mar 30, 2003, 10:02 am
Wonderful column guys. I look forward to seeing this, and every day that I log on, and there isn't something new, a little piece of me dies. It's really nasty, and is becoming a problem at work.
Well, I'm off on to catch a flight. Glad I got to read something good first thing.
******

Alex Guillen
Mar 30, 2003, 11:56 am
I enjoyed the column, I don't see the big fuss, hey if you enjoyed it it's good and if you didn't just say so , don't go around saying the Lauen and Anthony are stupid.

Joel Phillips
Mar 30, 2003, 12:33 pm
This is the funniest one you've done yet, although I have to admit that a substantial amount of my enjoyment of it stems from the people who still kinda believe this is real despite all the previous installments. (I could say the old "fool me once..." adage, but I won't. I'd sound like my grandmother and nobody wants that.)

Anyway, thanks for the chuckle. Keep up the good work.

anthomaniac1023
Mar 30, 2003, 01:47 pm
Hrmmm, not the best from this column, I've found some Xtreme reviews to be funnier. :saint: Still a good job though.

Jim Lemoine
Mar 30, 2003, 02:22 pm
Originally posted by BenedictX
Anthony, this was brilliant, as usual, and i find myself looking forward to your column almost above all others (but don't tell Jim Lemoine)

Tell who?

It was indeed brilliant, as usual. And if you ask me, the best one yet. I laughed as much reading this as I do when reading Gail Simone. If that's not high comedic praise, I don't know what is.

But then, I'm a big Potter fan, so maybe I got more of it than some people did. Such as....

Originally posted by thebigO
i dont like bagging out people's stuff. i ust thought i should voice my disliking of this.....fanfic.

i guess i think it has a time and a place and i dont believe this is it. i wont be reading the column again. maybe X-Fan should have a 'special' spot for this kind of stuff.

i dont think this kind of column is either good or funny, and i believe it is misplaced on this site due to the rest of the infomation found in the site. whilst i understand and respect the need for diversity here, i will again state that every thing has a place, and i really dont think its cool.

why not have a spot like the review section?
( could it possibly be it would have less readership? haha! this reminds me of how the t.v networks put a crappy sitcom after friends, not that friends is't crap but you get what i mean i'm sure)


In order: It's not a fanfic, it's a parody. We do have a 'special spot' for this kind of stuff... as a Feature, it goes in the Features column. If you don't think the column is good or funny, that's fine, it's your right. But a lot of other people thought it was great.

X-Fan has a long history of branching out into areas other than straight news, and as we expand our content in the coming months, you'll see a wider variety of content than ever.

Our review section (which gets TONS of hits, by the way, thanks for asking) wouldn't be the place for a feature. This is a feature. This is the Features column. It goes here.

Wasn't that fun?

NicholasRogue
Mar 30, 2003, 03:23 pm
This was a cute column, Magneto ate Beak's parents ! :LOL:

Alex Groff
Mar 30, 2003, 06:19 pm
Apologies, but I thought this was a bit more tedious than the previous columns. Both Red Bub and the Daredevil mall tour kept things changing throughout the article, while with this one felt like you [the reader] knew where you were going once you got on the train. Otherwise, I love your column, and can't wait to see the next one.

Jorge Ramiro
Mar 30, 2003, 07:13 pm
Hey guys , I loved your column ; spicy dark humour ; I loved the Darkstar and Psylocke comments , I also had lots of fun with the Larroca incident column. Go on with the good job , somebody has to give life a little fun , humour and frivolity.

X-Corps(NZ)
Mar 30, 2003, 08:50 pm
This Column Rules, Wolverine would make such a good groundskeeper, infact it's in his blood. The perfect marriage of two of the greatest literary masterpieces of our time.

Anthony Zisa
Mar 30, 2003, 11:49 pm
Seriously, everyone, thanks for all the feedback, good and bad. :)

Originally posted by Phlebas
Apologies, but I thought this was a bit more tedious than the previous columns. Both Red Bub and the Daredevil mall tour kept things changing throughout the article, while with this one felt like you [the reader] knew where you were going once you got on the train. Otherwise, I love your column, and can't wait to see the next one.

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Prose is obviously not our strong suit, but we didn't feel the parody could work any either way (as Rowlings is a prose writer). We were worried going in that parodying such a talented writer was going to be difficult, particularly when we tend to skew with better results in dialogue-driven and/or faux-news format (which both Lauren and I have extensive backgrounds in).

I'm not sure if either of us are itching to do a prose parody again--it's much more intensive than dialogue, because prose requires a certain degree of using a thesaurus, while most people aren't walking thesauruses (thesaurusi? thesaurish? meese?) when they talk.

However, considering the first stories I ever wrote were prose stories, it did feel sort of like a homecoming, warts and all. :)

--acz

(By the by, those who weren't as thrilled with this installment, but enjoyed the rest... next week is dialogue-driven, and I'm giggling as I do the pre-prep work. Hope you'll all enjoy it.)

crozack
Mar 31, 2003, 01:45 am
I liked it. This column was very amusing. But I think it suffers from what the other "satirical" columns on X-Fan suffer from. It starts out as a very good satire and then drops to crazy parody after a while. It's not necessarily a bad thing but it does sort of throw off a reader like me. Hell, I'm probably in the minority so don't worry about it.

Brytanica1
Mar 31, 2003, 01:16 pm
It was cute.

You guys actually did a really good job in imitating Rowling's style.

gatorgav
Mar 31, 2003, 06:17 pm
Thats funny, because after the last iss of NXM I felt like I was reading the last chapter of a Harry Potter book only it was Morrison's version of Harry Potter. The thing is, I liked the column and I really liked the issue because of this. Does that make me a tool?:?

Anthony Lucynski
Apr 5, 2003, 05:13 pm
I think that guy who bagged your column (bagged?) should do his criticism in proper haiku fashion.

It's a matter of principle in all things Jemas, you know.

Anthony L

Andy Shaw
Apr 5, 2003, 06:29 pm
Originally posted by thebigO
this is the stupidist thing. i look forward to reading news and rumors and all other stuff related to comics, not this.
this is like some crappy 'what if' collum. isnt there something more constructive you could do with your time...? please, your wasting mine.

its not even funny.

O

Lauren! Anthony!

This fine specimen of man took time out from his busy schedule of finding a cure for cancer and adopting orphaned puppies to read your column and god darnit you went and wasted his time!

Say you're sorry!

No, seriously.

Anthony Lucynski
Apr 5, 2003, 08:12 pm
Check it out, it's Andy frickin Shaw. Welcome to X-fan!

Now write a Haiku :mad:

Anthony L

Andy Shaw
Apr 5, 2003, 08:18 pm
Originally posted by Anthony Lucynski
Check it out, it's Andy frickin Shaw. Welcome to X-fan!

Now write a Haiku :mad:

Anthony L

Your pro-haiku agenda has gone too far, I refuse to play ball with haikuists.

Anthony Lucynski
Apr 5, 2003, 08:34 pm
I know. I"m ashamed of myself.

:(

Anthony L

darkelf63
May 28, 2004, 01:28 pm
Yeah I actually thought that Sammy would be a good "Ron" but the fight between the sushi kids was funny.

Still loved the buffy one the most, but this was entertaining...

"Magneto ate my parents" LOL